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9 thoughts on “monster”
u are a magnificent storyteller. i was totally engrossed in this poem. completely. it evoked all kinds of emotions in me…
it makes me wanna DO something.
well done, SB. well done.
thanks so much for reading and responding. i was initially hesitant to post. this wasn’t my experience (my story) and i didn’t want the words to feel false. i appreciate your feedback.
you told a clear story, with a clear conflict/resolution and i could see every detail in my brain. there is a colloquial yet philosophical edge to this piece that speaks to so many people on so many levels. great work!
Now I have more inspiration for my next post.
Keep up the good work!
Very well written. You told it very well and I am sure someone who has lived it could say this speaks for them.
That was amazing man.
Reminded me of Springsteen’s darker material— which is a definate compliment!
Very deep, you will touch so many souls with this post. Keep up the great work!
MY God…you write with such realism and depth…and, most of all, HEART!
Thank you. ☮