9 thoughts on “monster

  1. u are a magnificent storyteller. i was totally engrossed in this poem. completely. it evoked all kinds of emotions in me…

    it makes me wanna DO something.

    well done, SB. well done.

    1. thanks so much for reading and responding. i was initially hesitant to post. this wasn’t my experience (my story) and i didn’t want the words to feel false. i appreciate your feedback.

  2. you told a clear story, with a clear conflict/resolution and i could see every detail in my brain. there is a colloquial yet philosophical edge to this piece that speaks to so many people on so many levels. great work!

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