7 thoughts on “insomnia

  1. I love this poem! Insomnia has been brilliantly personified…now I know who to blame for those sleepless nights. Dope!

  2. i really love the way you personify sleep. it’s great. i think the poem can end with the lines of the stanza before the last:

    she will have her way with me
    use me and tease me and at sunrise leave me

    that would be an even stronger ending.

    nice work 🙂

  3. Awesome poem!! Very cool! Yes “she” visits me often also. Insomnia to me feels me more like a creature stalking me and striking everyone time I try to close my ends forcing me to open my eyes again to stay awake watchful of any attacks.

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