I’s free. Broken bones and skin. Free. Don’t know where’s I’ll end up. Free. John ain’t my name. Share that name with ol’ massa’s dog. Lawd. I don’t know who I am, but I is free. A free man. A man free. Gotta keep runnin’ fore sunrise. Fore they miss me. My breath leavin’ me. Don’t get tired. Don’t let me get tired. They kill Sam. They ain’t gonna kill me. Free. Done hear tell of a place I can go. Hope this the way. Good white folks’ there. Keep runnin’…. Got clean away. Free. I see the river. Gotta run cross the river. I ain’t never been in water pass my knee. Sky turnin’ all kinds of red and yellow. Don’t let me get tired Lawd. Ain’t got no time. Ain’t got no more. Reckon I can rest up here. NO! That tired you feel is the devil. Evil thoughts leave me be. Run. Run. FREE!
© Speaks Beliefs, 2009. All rights reserved.
This is my first serious attempt at prose poetry. Thanks Crystal Belle!
wow! this is FIRE! i absolutely love how you use the dialect to speak to reader in such a vivid way. the notion of freedom after captivity is a great theme. i like how in the end the voice seemed to come from within, kind of like the Creator. i really enjoyed this. thanks for the shoutout! i’m going to work on mine tomorrow. i can’t wait to share. great stuff!!!!!
TALKING DRUMS
Biddy-bop, biddy-bop, hear the African drums
Biddy-bop, biddy-bop, understood by all tongues
Biddy-bop, biddy-bop, slaves from different tribes
Biddy-bop, biddy-bop, sharing musical vibes
Biddy-bop, biddy-bop, getting in the groove
Biddy-bop, biddy-bop, soon we’ll make our move
Biddy-bop, biddy-bop, when you hear the beat
Biddy-bop, biddy-bop, start to move your feet
Biddy-bop, biddy-bop, master never knew
Biddy-bop, biddy-bop, what our drums could do
Biddy-bop, biddy-bop, using secret code
Biddy-bop, biddy-bop, our plans unfold
Biddy-bop, biddy-bop, when the sun goes down
Biddy-bop, biddy-bop, we’ll head out of town
Biddy-bop, biddy-bop, you just follow me
Biddy-bop, biddy-bop, soon we’ll all be F-R-E-E!
This poem made me remember traveling from Detroit to Canada via the moss on the trees on a girl scout trip. Man, I loved Canada and respect it for being a “free” location.