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u are a magnificent storyteller. i was totally engrossed in this poem. completely. it evoked all kinds of emotions in me…
it makes me wanna DO something.
well done, SB. well done.
July 19, 2010 at 9:12 pm
thanks so much for reading and responding. i was initially hesitant to post. this wasn’t my experience (my story) and i didn’t want the words to feel false. i appreciate your feedback.
July 19, 2010 at 9:18 pm
you told a clear story, with a clear conflict/resolution and i could see every detail in my brain. there is a colloquial yet philosophical edge to this piece that speaks to so many people on so many levels. great work!
July 20, 2010 at 7:47 am
Great story,
Now I have more inspiration for my next post.
Keep up the good work!
July 28, 2010 at 3:30 pm
Very well written. You told it very well and I am sure someone who has lived it could say this speaks for them.
July 31, 2010 at 9:06 pm
That was amazing man.
Reminded me of Springsteen’s darker material— which is a definate compliment!
August 6, 2010 at 5:48 pm
Awesome Post!
Very deep, you will touch so many souls with this post. Keep up the great work!
August 7, 2010 at 8:27 pm