This entry was posted on September 24, 2009. It was filed under Love, My Favorites, Short Story, Spoken Word, Tragedy .

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1. 

   Substance

   SB, i LOVE this so much!!!

   i’ve always been a big fan of mythology, especially the stories that try to explain how some natural phenomenon came to be.

   this has all the makings of a timeless legend–true love, rivalry, sabotage, tragedy, vengeance, and lovely imagery.

   u certainly do ur thing…keep ‘em coming!

   September 25, 2009 at 1:28 pm
   

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2. 

   Jo Nubian

   Sir Speaks….
   Your words are a blessing to me. I always ponder and reflect after reading them.

   This piece laments the manner in which we sometimes ruin one another, even unknowingly and with hopes to help/heal/love.

   We have much work…and your words point us in that direction.

   September 25, 2009 at 1:45 pm
   

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3. 

   Speaks Beliefs

   Thanks for sharing your thoughts. I means a lot to me to hear reactions from such beautiful minds.

   September 25, 2009 at 2:02 pm
   

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4. 

   Joy

   Your words bring these 2 mythological gods 2 life in such a poignant way. I read it twice, coz I wanted to savour the imagery. Tks for sharing.

   September 25, 2009 at 4:05 pm
   

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5. 

   KY

   Tips hat to you*

   you’re so eloquent with verse. I love the visual connection between words!

   September 26, 2009 at 12:23 am
   

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6. 

   Crystal Belle

   the narrative voice is beautiful here, fueled by mythology. i could feel the passion and the love and all of the barriers that come in the way of true love.

   beautiful.

   September 27, 2009 at 12:47 pm
   

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7. 

   fly tie

   i would love to hear this read aloud.

   beautifully composed.

   October 9, 2009 at 1:24 am
   

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